Talk:??. - TITANIC: D. S. V. (MAIN ENGINEERING) -/@comment-76.107.7.58-20140906152935

George,

Quick thought here. Actors love it when you give them natural dialog. Natural means this: people speak in contractions. Every day I go back over every line of dialog I write and make sure that I have adjusted for this natural feel. For instance, the Captain might not say "We are not". He would simply say We're not. Ahern would then reply "Two weeks...that's using three shifts..."

You get the idea. This sounds more natural as it is how people really speak. We dont really take the time to say things like "I will do this". We just say "I'll do this". It will make your script a much more friendly and natural read.

Michael Sieve